right hi .....

hi im rachael and my bffl michaela who like owns this blog invited me 2 like post stuff on hear so yea iv been wright in a sond and i thought i would like share it with u guys and i no its a bit rubish and dosent make no sence but it comes from the harte so coment and tell me and my bestfriend what u think so hear it goes....

daddy why

my misery begun when my dady walked out that door
i was only nine years old
maby i was being to bold
my mommy came running downstarirs
and she burst into tears i was to yonge 2 understand
why mommy was being like this

daddy why ?
did u leave us in all this pain
daddy why?
did u think this was all a game
after all u and mommy have been through
and did u foget what we had
so daddy tell me the anwser to this please
daddy why?


yea i havnt fineshed it yet so like tell me this

how much would you rate it (out of 10)
what did u like
and where could i improve plz
thankz

love rachael